Fist
And my fate line
still steers clear
of my life
I've questioned
And traced
And come up blank
yet again
sunny days
make me think
oh, this is it
And I keep my
fist closed
like a gift
under a tree
savoring the hope
And then quickly ripped
a paper wrapping
And did I think
I could alter
my fleshy groove

2 Comments:
EVERYONE STUDY THIS USE OF TITLE! Very smart.
the fist is the focal point of the poem, brilliant! i like i, it has an immense amount of emotion in few words!
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